Category: stories

Mr. Penumbra’s Twenty-Four-Hour Book Store

Imagine the volume of a normal store turned on its side: It was absurdly narrow and dizzyingly tall. And the shelves went all the way up—five stories of books. The whole place was dim and dusty; you couldn’t even really see the ceiling.

Robin Sloan’s Mr. Penumbra’s Twenty-Four-Hour Book Store, available free to read at the previous link or free to listen to on Escape Pod, is a delightful story about mystery, immortality, and the fate of the book in the digital age. Set in the midst of our current recession, it straddles the worlds of a fanciful antiquarian bookshop and an even more fanciful Google Books project. There are dusty tomes, mysterious gentlemen, delicate robots, astounding technologies, and even a little romance, packed into a story that takes Stephen Ely less than 45 minutes to read. I haven’t read, nor do I intend to read, Dan Brown’s “Symbology” books, but I imagine that this story is what those would have been if Mr. Brown could write engaging sentences and created his own world rather than plundering hoary old Templar myths.

Mr. Sloan is working on a longer story set in the same universe as Mr. Penumbra’s shop; if this story is any indication, that story should be compelling, evocative, and thought-provoking.

Troll’s Eye View

And what, one might wonder, was the slight, pernicious habit that blemished my otherwise purely beneficent character?

To be brief, I kill and eat human babies.

‘Skin by Michael Cadnum, from Troll’s Eye View

Troll’s Eye View is a collection of stories revisiting well-known fairy tales–Rumpelstiltskin, Hansel and Gretel, Molly and the Giants–often from the villain’s point of view. It’s a mixed bag of stories: some are slightly skewed re-tellings, some are realistic stories informed by the themes and structures of fairy tales, and some are new tales that add meat to the well-gnawed bones. Some of the stories work well, others don’t quite gel, but in the main, this is a solid little collection.

Most of the contributors are from the world of young adult fantasy, and the collection is aimed at that audience: though often dark, the stories are not too dark, and certainly not as disturbing as Angela Carter’s tales. Ellen Datlow, the editor, has enlisted a few well-known authors, too. Peter Beagle contributes a Jack and the Beanstalk tale that sounds like the giant’s wife as imagined by Raymond Carver, and Kelly Link provides an affecting contemporary Cinderella populated only by step-siblings who are not quite evil and not quite good. The Beagle and Link stories are what will attract adult readers to this anthology, but there are actually better stories than theirs in the collection.

By far the most successful story is Catherynne Valente’s “A Delicate Architecture,” which nudges as close to Angela Carter’s grim fairy tale world as it can. It’s not a re-telling but a brand new fairy story, with a twist at the end in which the tale’s victim is revealed to be the villain of a classic tale. It will be hard to revisit that old story without feeling a touch of sympathy for its evil presence.

Demons in the Spring

But the hotel had to be real. It had to be. If there was a hotel made of real ice, a hotel of ice that did not melt, where people could visit and sleep, and then if they could rebuild it, every year, if every year it could be rebuilt, well, then there could be a possibility for anything, a reason to believe that right now was not the end of everything.

“Winter in the World-Famous Ice Hotel,” from Demons in the Spring by Joe Meno

Joe Meno’s Demons in the Spring is filled with wonders: a woman with a city growing inside her chest, an aquarium in decline, a world plunged into darkness by an absent moon, palaces made of ice. There’s a touch of the absurd, and the surreal, with a melancholy haze over many of the stories, but the overall tone is of playfulness and amazement. It is informed by the logic of dreams, even in the more realistic stories; surrender to the dreams, and you’ll be swept into a world spinning just a little out of phase with our own.

Demons in the Spring in addition to being a wonderful collection of words is also a beautiful object in itself. In this age of harsh text on electronic devices, McSweeney’s puts out amazing books to be treasured as physical delights. Each story is illustrated by a different artist, ranging from realistic renderings of sea creatures to Chagall-like collages of color and shape. The pages in the book are rich and heavy, and even the end papers delight. Keep your sensory-deprivation-tank Kindle, I say, and give me more books that make reading into a multi-sensory immersion.

Driving the Heart

“When in doubt,” I tell him, “always drive on. Just remember that one thing, all right? All right?”
Driving the Heart, Jason Brown

The thirteen stories in Jason Brown’s Driving the Heart are about driving on, regardless of obstacles and, to a great extent, without a focus on the ultimate destination. These are largely grim tales, full of brain tumors, car wrecks, and lives wasted by booze and drugs, but they are not hopeless tales; they are peopled with characters who drive on, even while others around them are coming to a stop.

The two showcase pieces–the title story and “The Coroner’s Report”–are about imparting the lesson of driving on. Both are narrated by men whose jobs leave little room for sentiment: one drives human organs to hospitals, the other is a coroner in Portland, Maine. And both narrators have great wells of sentiment, regret, and nostalgia beneath their clinical, hard-shelled demeanors. They connect the painful, matter-of-fact events of their jobs to tragedies in their pasts, and use these shifting connections to weave tenuous webs of meaning. Though they are ostensibly passing knowledge to junior colleagues, they are busy making internal sense of their own lies.

Like Brown’s latest collection, Why the Devil Chose New England for His Work, “Driving the Heart” is set mostly in Maine. But unlike his later stories, revolving around a rural Kennebec River town, these have an urban setting, largely in and around Portland. As such, the stories have a grittier feel, and touch on the problems of cities: homelessness, murder, and public drunkenness turn up frequently. The Eastern Prom, Fore Street, and the Cumberland County Detox are as much characters in these stories as the people. Brown’s Portland is a demimonde of dead-end lies, untouched by the tourist board’s romantic patina. The picturesque wharf district smells of dead fish and diesel fuel, with desperate but intent struggles in the shadows of the lovely pine trees.

Peer Review

UnderwoodMy short story Peer Review appears this month in issue #1 of the new literary journal Media Virus. (Issue #1 is really the second issue of the journal; my inner Java programmer likes that the numbering system indicates a zero-based index.)

Though blatantly inspired by Kafka–Joseph K. is a main character, and much of the “action” is set in The Castle–this is actually a true story.

A long time ago, I was one of the editors of my undergraduate literary magazine. We had a circulation of a couple hundred, maybe, and twice a year we slogged through a big pile of bad break-up poetry, pompous efforts in surrealism, and juvenilia of all sorts. It was a somewhat depressing chore. Every now and then, though, something really good showed up. One year, the really good thing was a poem, attached to a name we didn’t recognize but in a style we thought we could identify as belonging to a good friend of mine (who never owned up to it, but I’m still suspicious). Our hearts were gladdened, we rejoiced, and we three editors unanimously voted it in.

Unfortunately, the poem had some salty language and disturbing content. This was a small Catholic liberal arts college, and salty disturbances were not welcome. Our advisor didn’t stop us, but someone in the college copy center (the journal had zine-like production values) did. They refused to continue printing it unless we took the poem out.

Maybe we should have made a bigger stink about it, turned it into a local cause celebre and stood our ground: legally, the college was well within its rights to stop the publication (a private institution has a lot of leeway), but you only get to be young and idealistic once. We held up for a couple weeks, with a little faculty sympathy, but in the end we buckled under and pulled the poem. I’m still a little disappointed we didn’t try harder.

But during the brief controversy, the poem made the rounds through the faculty and administration, attached to various memos and letters. I heard that it even got discussed at the president’s Christmas party. Given the success of the journal itself, it was probably read by more people than would have seen it if it had just been tucked in amongst the better bad break-up poems and audacious second-person stories casting the reader into the consciousness of a plastic bottle.

All of this was in the Dark Ages, around 1989, before e-mail and the Internet changed a whole lot of things. The story would probably have played out very differently today, now that Joseph K. has traded in his bank of manual typewriters and stacks of carbon paper for a cheap Linux server on a wireless network.

Or perhaps not. The Internet has increased the noise, but not necessarily improved the signal; it’s easier to publish, but harder to build mindshare. It may still be a valid strategy to address your manila envelope to Mr. N., clerk of Section S, and hope for the best.

Pieces and fifteen other stories

PiecesI’m dipping a toe into the self-publishing waters with a short story collection, “Pieces and fifteen other stories,” available at Smashwords as an e-book, Lulu as a paperback and e-book, and on Amazon for the Kindle. It’s priced to move on all platforms: $2 for the e-book, and $12.50 in the print-on-demand version.

Twelve of the sixteen stories have been published in small literary journals. Many of them are available online, for free; you can see the list here. I suppose that the free versions undercut my low, low price for the whole collection, but note that the collection has a couple of benefits: it contains several stories not available online, it packages all of the stories together into an easily-consumable and carefully-sequenced format, and the proceeds help to underwrite my literary efforts.

The four new stories aren’t just “bottom-of-the-drawer” filler, either. One of them was accepted for publication at a small journal that went under before it was printed. Another was one of the manuscripts that made the cut in the Speakeasy contest to be sent to the final judge that year, Amy Bloom. The other two have been in heavy circulation to journals, sometimes coming back with helpful editorial comments, so they’re well-polished pieces.

I chose Lulu.com because I’ve used it before for making calendars and picture books for family consumption: it’s an easy process, and a quality product. I chose Smashwords because I’ve seen some good reviews, and they didn’t push a lot of the vanity press “services”: they provide a basic platform for distribution e-books, and that’s all I need. And I chose Amazon, with some trepidation (as previously noted), because of their scale, and because the installed base of Kindle devices seems like a good market of avid readers. (Note that Smashwords makes a Kindle-compatible version available, too; if you’re a Kindle user with some concerns about the Amazon stranglehold, take a look at the Smashwords version). There are many other e-book and POD resources out there; if you have a favorite, please make a case for it, and I’ll take a look at it.

I’ll publish updates on the adventure here; I don’t expect to see the same sort of success that some writers have had in e-book publishing, but there may be a niche market for these stories worth tapping.

in defense of the short story

Malaria poster in small hotel, Puerto Rico ... San Juan (LOC)Crawford Kilian’s “About Writing” blog is one of my regular reads; he offers lots of good, no-nonsense, nuts-and-bolts advice about writing. A recent article, though, about the rather arbitrary demarcations based on length between short stories, novellas, and novels, contained a paragraph that raised my hackles a bit:

I don’t want to discourage anyone from writing at whatever length they like. Short stories can be great reading, and also great training for writers aiming at novels. Two or three novellas, published together, can be quite marketable (preferably, however, if the author’s already well known).

This touches on two misconceptions about the short story that overlook the fact that the story and the novel are two completely different creatures:

  1. Short stories are a training ground for the real work of fiction, the novel.
  2. Short stories are outside the marketable space that novels occupy.

These are commonly-held beliefs, and to a great extent self-fulfilling prophesies. And they are both far off the mark.

Short stories (and sometimes novellas, too, those odd ducks in the middle distance) are not miniature novels. They do not do the same things that novels do, and do not play by the novel’s rules. The pleasures to be found in writing and reading stories are completely different from those to be found in writing and reading novels; they are not mutually exclusive pleasures–a reader can be passionate about both forms, and a writer can be successful at both (though, I would argue, there are few who are supremely successful at both)–but they are very different.

The short story is an art of compression. It is in many ways closer to poetry than to the novel; though it’s written in prose, with paragraphs and often dialogue and frequently plot, it relies upon a succinct and careful choice of words to convey its effect. The story is about the art of excision: the story writer’s scalpel must be sharp and merciless.

Novels, by contrast, tend toward the inclusive. They are about finding and extending relations and connections across characters and settings, and often have a baroque architecture full of reflections and echoes. A novel need not be mercilessly efficient: it can be, as Henry James (one of those few who was a master of both forms) said, a “loose and baggy monster” and still be successful. Indeed, the looser and baggier the better in many cases.

Reading a novel is like relaxing into a comfortable chair. It invites the reader to become lost in its world, to spin out the million possibilities of its setting while reading; there’s a hypnotic effect to reading a novel, a loss of the sense of time and place. When I’m reading a good novel, I find that I slow down toward the end and try not to glance at the bottom of the page: I want the effect to go on, I don’t want to leave the novel’s world.

Stories, on the other hand, are more like a Shaker chair: carefully crafted, beautiful in their apparent simplicity, but a little uncomfortable for an extended sit. Most stories have few characters, one or two settings, and almost never subplots. Like a poem, every word in a story has to serve the story’s ultimate goal; there’s very little room for digression and diversion. Reading a story is a quick plunge into a bracing pool: its ultimate effect occurs more on reflection than while submerged.

What the stories offer to the reader and the writer, that the novel doesn’t, is a variety of experience and a diversity of voices. A story can be experimental in ways that a novel, or at least the traditional novel, cannot, because it doesn’t have to sustain a style or voice or device over hundreds of pages. Each story is its own world, swiftly brought to life in twenty or so pages and then just as quickly discarded. Though many writers of short fiction revisit the same places, themes, even characters, over the course of many stories, there’s no demand for unity across the stories as there would be in a novel: each story offers a new view of the familiar, a different perspective that may reinforce or contradict related stories.

When a writer has had a successful career at writing stories, the critics will often wonder aloud, “Why hasn’t she written a novel?” Raymond Carver, Andre Dubus, Alice Munro, Amy Hempel: incredibly gifted short story writers, but not a novel among them. Not, I think, because of a lack of ambition on their part: their ideas, concise and sparkling, are simply more suited to the story form.

We fans of the story often hear that “short story collections don’t sell,” “publishers never buy story collections,” “people would rather read novels.” When publishers do put out a collection of stories, they tend to disguise it: “a novel in stories,” they say, or they make clear in the marketing material that the stories are “linked” in some way. This does a great disservice to both the story and to the reader: it forces the stories into a relationship that may not be appropriate, and it tries to trick the reader into thinking they’re getting something that they aren’t. The publishing industry’s fear of the short story is a self-fulfilling prophecy. No one wants to read story collections because story collections aren’t offered to readers as what they are: a reading experience very different from a novel, but equally enjoyable and engrossing. Stories might be a little more work sometimes than novels–the reader is switching settings and characters every ten or twenty pages, which can sometimes feel like whiplash–but a well-sequenced story collection, like a good poetry collection, can leave space for reflection between pieces and help the cumulative effect of dissonant themes and voices build to a powerful crescendo.

Stories are also the appropriate form for the way we live now. They are interstitial by nature, able to be squeezed into small spaces (I love the little volumes of One Story and Duck and Herring, perfect for slipping into a pocket or purse), ideal for the few moments we can steal for ourselves. And their fractured narratives and small moments of insight feel more like a modern life than the carefully wrought, intricately plotted novel: this morning I felt like I was in a Faulkner story, by mid-day things had turned Kafkaesque, and perhaps tonight I’ll relax into a more genteel Mansfield mode. Our lives are a jangling buzz of voices, and stories help us make sense of that.

My library puts an orange label on the spines of story collections, perhaps as a warning to readers: this book is not quite like its neighbors, it may offer a reading experience completely different from what you expect. I find this to be useful not as a warning, but as a beacon: I know that inside each of these emblazoned books are a dozen different voices, clamoring against each other, and that some of them will whisper in my ears for weeks.

Five Stories About Camping

We’ve just come back from a family camping trip to St. Croix State Park; inspired by the lists at A Commonplace Blog (inspired, in turn, by the Five Best series at the Wall Street Journal), here are five short stories that deal with one aspect or another of the camping experience:

To Build a Fire by Jack London

When I teach firebuilding to Scouts, I explain that there are three components to a successful fire: fuel, spark, and oxygen. The rest, as they say, is commentary.

One of the best commentaries on firebuilding is Jack London’s story of survival on the Yukon Trail. I read this story back in middle school or high school, where it’s taught as an example of the “Man against Nature” theme, and it has always stuck with me; I allude to it when I do firebuilding with Webelos at winter camp, hoping that it will make some sort of connection for them between Scoutcraft, literature, and winter survival. Even if it doesn’t, though, I hope it at least encourages them to remember not to put their fire under a snow-laden tree branch.

The Wendigo by Algernon Blackwood

My favorite camping tradition is to read classic ghost stories to the hiss of the Coleman lantern, after everyone else has gone to bed; M.R. James, J.S. LeFanue, and Wilkie Collins all have the smell of woodsmoke around them when I reflect on their stories.

“The Wendigo” tells the story of a camping trip gone terribly wrong, which helps put the small inconveniences of any normal camping trip (my own was marred by forgetting the air mattress pump and the stovetop espresso maker) into perspective: anything you’ll meet in our state parks is sure to be easier to overcome than a flesh-eating unspeakable monster.

It’s also the best story to read when camping in the northwoods: the wendigo/windigo is an Algonquian monster that grows out of the fears (and desires) of consuming human flesh. Thoroughly weird and creepy, especially when read in the insufficient light cast by a Coleman lantern.

Big Two-Hearted River by Earnest Hemingway

There probably is no better camping and fishing tale than Hemingway’s story of Nick Adams in the burnt-over country of northern Michigan. Adams has taken to the woods to remember and to forget; the story unfolds without quite unfolding, never giving away the things that haunt Adams. It is a very in-the-moment story, focused on the minutiae of making camp, cooking coffee, and catching fish, with faint glimpses of things swimming far below the surface.

We Are Not In This Together by William Kittredge

William Kittredge is an heir, if not the heir, to Hemingway’s Nick Adams stories. In “We Are Not In This Together,” a man hunts a killer grizzly bear, but the bear is much like Ahab’s white whale: the prey is as much his own heart.

A Note on the Camping Craze That is Currently Sweeping America by Richard Brautigan

Much as I imagine my camping trips in the Nick Adams vein, they’re really more like the suburbs-in-the-woods that Richard Brautigan describes. We live closer to our fellow campers than we do our neighbors in the city, and no self-respecting bear (or chipmunk) would wander into the camper cul-de-sacs for the open-fire TV dinners we feast on. And when I look at much of my beloved camping gear–the Coleman lantern, the Kangaroo Kitchen, the nylon hammock–I see the schlock that Brautigan describes. I only hope to be rolled up in my tent someday and carted out in an ambulance.

A Small, Good Thing

From a shopkeeper who has to contend with barbarians, to a shopkeeper who acts (unwittingly) like a barbarian, until he learns the story behind the stale cake that was never picked up and acts like an angel.

We always get the boys’ birthday cake at A Baker’s Wife, a local pastry shop run by a Plaza Hotel chef. Their cakes are rich and dreamy, and I always volunteer to pick it up because then I can secretly grab a chocolate croissant or a miniature pecan pie.

But I can never order the cake without thinking of Raymond Carver’s “A Small, Good Thing.” It casts a pall over the whole cake-ordering experience.

He was a baker. He was glad he wasn’t a florist. It was better to be feeding people. This was a better smell anytime than flowers.

Told in Carver’s signature flat, direct style, “A Small, Good Thing” is the story of a birthday cake that is tragically left at the bakery, the baker’s attempts to be reimbursed for the cake, and the solace of warm rolls.

An Old Manuscript

Here it is May 15 already, halfway through the Short Story Month declared by the Emerging Writers Network, and I haven’t written anything about my favorite literary form. I blame Peter’s tonsillectomy, several bags of mulch, the beautiful weather (it’s a crime to squander Minnesota’s few fragile days of summer in front of a computer), and general inertia, but I’ll make up for it the rest of the month.

Marcel Jolley proposed a “short story mix tape” back at the beginning of the month, and I’m going to put together a “mix tape” of my own. Kids these days probably don’t know about the art of the “mix tape,” what with MP3s and last.fm and all that. But I remember well queuing up a record, trying to time the drop of the needle with the press of the record button, waiting anxiously for one song to end so I could add another, and trying to figure out just how many minutes were left on the tape–did I dare try to squeeze in “You Can’t Get What You Want” or should I finish up with “Red Shoes” and save Joe Jackson for the next side? The programming was important, finding the songs that paired up well and led with perfect inevitability, one to the next; odd juxtapositions were OK, but horrible clashes–Bananarama and the Dead Kennedys on the same tape?–were to be avoided. I would sometimes leave the tape queued up for days while I pondered the next song to add.

So, to open up my short story mix tape, I’m going with Kafka. And not the obvious Kafka (“The Metamorphosis” or “The Hunger Artist”) but one of his shortest, but most haunting, stories, “An Old Manuscript”:

Whatever they need, they take. You cannot call it taking by force. They grab at something and you simply stand aside and leave them to it.

In two pages, Kafka lays out a scenario that is equal parts hilarious, terrifying, and exasperating. “Nomads from the North” have invaded a quiet and civilized capital city, and are wreaking havoc, stealing from the shops, dirtying the streets, and generally behaving badly. The Emperor is sometimes seen peering through his windows, but doesn’t come out of his palace; the Emperor’s guard no longer defends the city; and “[i]t is left to us artisans and tradesmen to save our country; but we are not equal to such a task; nor have we ever claimed to be capable of it.”

The narrator, a cobbler, tells this story in an understated tone: the invasion “troubles” him, and he seems as bothered by the mess the barbarians make as by their apparent brutality and cruelty. He’s not outraged at the Emperor’s abdication, nor terribly fearful of the nomads: he takes practical steps to keep the peace and avoid conflict, and seems resigned to (and surprisingly incurious about) his fate.

Like any Kafka story, the reader can lay any number of glosses over the top of this simple tale. Perhaps there’s a historical layer: it was written in 1919, after the fall of the Austro-Hungarian Empire, we hen nationalism was unleashed across Central Europe, a fact which would almost certainly have made an urban Jew in Prague nervous. Or it might be a more general observation about how people adjust to horrors gradually, day by day, until the unthinkable becomes routine. Maybe there’s some cultural anxiety about the modern world’s incursions on the arts, or some “Revolt of the Masses” fear of the uncouth. But no simple explanation can dismiss the unease and quiet dread that come through in the cobbler’s simple statements about the invasion of his quiet city.

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