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Tenth of December

Why should those he loved not lift and bend and feed and wipe him, when he would gladly do the same for them? He’d been afraid to be lessened by the lifting and bending and feeding and wiping, and was still afraid of that, and yet, at the same time, now saw that there would still be many–many drops of goodness, is how it came to him–many drops of happy–of good fellowship–ahead, and those drops of fellowship were not–had never been–his to withheld.
Withhold.
Tenth of December by George Saunders

I’m not sure that I’d go quite so far as The New York Times in proclaiming that Tenth of December is the best book you’ll read this year; the year is young, and I read a lot of books. But it is probably the best book I’ve read so far this year, or at least a very close second, and it’s certainly the best book I’ve read this year that was published this year.

There are some things that have always irked me about George Saunders’ stories. His characters are a singularly inarticulate bunch, seemingly incapable of introspection and oblivious to their surroundings. While that may well be the point of stories like “Al Roosten” and “The Semplica Girl Diaries,” the point once having been made could probably be dropped, or at least suppressed. When I read one of his stories in “The New Yorker,” I sometimes feel a little cheated, as if I’ve got an issue with two “Shouts and Murmurs” columns instead of one clever but forgettable bit of satire and one solid short story.

But then I’ll read a story like “Escape from Spiderhead,” which explodes the Milgram experiment with a devastating example of human compassion, or “Home,” which counters all the stupid horror of the last two decades with subtle grace, or “Tenth of December,” which is the simplest expression of loving kindness in contemporary fiction, and I completely forgive Saunders for the numbing sameness of his characters’ voices. The world he offers up–of free will subverted by all manner of carefully (or not-so-carefully) wrought chemicals, of tawdry fame, of devastating but unthinking cruelty–is certainly our own; but the solutions he offers, or that his characters stumble into, are from so simple and beautiful a place that they are wholly alien.

From a writer’s perspective, the other thing I value in Saunders’ stories is their complete disregard for realism. Though Saunders’ moral universe is quite close to Andre Dubus’, he gleefully launches into the middle of a logical universe closer to Douglas Adams’ without needing to build the scaffolding to get there. Things aren’t just slightly off-kilter in his world; they can be extremely off-kilter (psychological drug experiments on prisoners? employees given consciousness-altering drugs as a normal part of their duties? immigrants frozen into symbolic tableaux on status-conscious suburbanites’ front lawns?), but Saunders doesn’t try to explain how things got to this point. Instead, he trusts the goodwill of his readers to suspend their disbelief and come along for the ride; and the payoff for surrendering to the madness more than makes up for any narrative gaps.

Of course, Saunders earns that trust by delivering on his promises. His characters, as inarticulate and self-absorbed and naive as they are, deliver up the goods; even if they aren’t always shaken out of their complacency, we are, and are made to see ourselves, uncomfortably, mirrored in these stories.

The London Train

It was a relief, to state the thing with such finality–as if she made it exist as an object to contemplate stony with clean lines and hard edges. With the loss of her parents behind her, and the loss of the babies she might have had ahead, she was withdrawn out of the past and future into this moment of herself, like a barren island, or a sealed box.

The London Train, Tessa Hadley

The London trainTessa Hadley; Harper Perennial 2011WorldCatLibraryThingGoogle BooksBookFinder 

It took me two years to finish Tessa Hadley’s The London Train, not because it’s a terribly long and challenging book but because I had trouble caring very deeply about Paul and Cora, the characters at the novel’s heart. They aren’t unlikeable, necessarily, nor especially likeable either; they were simply not very interesting–I didn’t find myself wanting desperately enough to know what was going to happen next to keep going.

This isn’t to say it’s a badly written book; it’s not. Hadley’s writing is on a par with Alice Munro, William Trevor, or Ian McEwan; I picked this book up because I’ve loved her short stories, which are sharp and insightful and present characters who are realistically attractive and repulsive in just the right mix. Not only is it well-written, it’s interestingly structured: chronology is turned inside out, and the parallel narratives–first Paul, then Cora–plays with perspective and tone, giving two very distinct flavors to Paul and Cora’s affair.

Alas, the main characters turn out to be the least interesting characters in the novel. Cora’s husband Robert, an outwardly staid civil servant who has a history of walking away from commitments; Paul’s neighbors, Welsh farmers with designs on the land on the property line; Paul’s daughter’s boyfriend, a Polish immigrant squatting in London with his sister and engaged in a shady import/export scheme; even the nameless exiled Iranian poet who dies in an immigration holding center; all of these characters are infinitely more interesting than Paul and Cora, and would make for interesting stories and possibly even a novel in their own right. Had the novel been boiled down to a story, or perhaps two stories that mirror each other and hinge on the chance meeting that leads to the affair, the banality of Paul and Cora might not have been a problem; but their consciousnesses are simply too slender to hold up 200 pages.

Do online lit journals go to heaven when they die?

oublietteFor the 10th anniversary of the Million Writers Award, Jason Sanford has put out a list of dead online literary journals. I note with not a little chagrin that my own publication history lines up pretty well with this list, and I’ve suggested a couple of additions to the list that appear to have died under Jason’s otherwise very sensitive radar.

Online literary journals are a great place for new writers to test their chops, and for adventurous readers to discover the future, or at least the present. They can take more risks than their print cousins, but are a little more casual, too: the great lit mag site of today is the dead URL (or, worse, domain-parking spam site) of tomorrow. There’s always the “wayback machine” at the Internet Archive (which captured this gem of a story from my past), but the Internet Archive has some pretty big gaps that a lit magazine can very easily slip through.

As places I’ve published disappear, I’ve been bringing stories over to Fictionaut, just to keep my various links alive. But there’s something about the ephemeral nature of online journals that is intriguing: while things can appear very quickly in the digital world, they can disappear just as quickly, maybe even more quickly, and leave absolutely no trace. The Internet’s oubliette can be darker and more final than any medieval tyrant could have dreamed, leaving not even a scratch on the wall and a handful of bones to mark its inmates’ passing.

A free story for Halloween!

Are you looking for something to fill the gap between trick-or-treaters this evening? Here’s a little something you might enjoy: “Among the Moabites,” a story that was originally published in the Cherry Bleeds journal and featured on the Pseudopod podcast, available free from Gumroad in PDF, ePUB, and MOBI formats.

A bit more about this story here.

The Last Policeman

Still, the conscientious detective is obliged to examine the question of motive in a new light, to place it within the matrix of our present unusual circumstance. The end of the world changes everything, from a law-enforcement perspective.
The Last Policeman, Ben H. Winters

Post-apocalyptic fiction is not uncommon, and indeed has been quite unavoidable in recent years. Pre-apocalyptic stories, on the other hand–stories set in the shadow of a known and anticipated end of the world, or at least end of the world as we know it–are rarer. On the Beach is to some extent–much of the novel’s power comes from the inevitability of the radiation clouds’ southward trek–but most end-of-the-world fiction is more interested in the aftermath than in the lead-up.

Ben H. Winters’ The Last Policeman is very solidly a pre-apocalyptic story; indeed, it closes well before the anticipated apocalypse (though with two more books to come in the series, there’s a good chance that the end will arrive). Set in a recognizably contemporary United States, the doom that will be visited on the world comes in the form of an asteroid, Maia: having avoided detection because of its long eliptical orbit, the 6-kilometer-around hunk of rock will collide with Earth on October 3rd. With just months to go before the asteroid hits and plunges the world into chaos, society is in disarray: many people have abandoned their posts to pursue “Bucket List” dreams, suicide is rampant, and mistrust is endemic. With no future to plan for, the physical and virtual infrastructure is collapsing, and a general malaise permeates everyday life.

In the midst of this breakdown is Henry Palace, a recently-promoted detective on the Concord, New Hampshire, police force, who is committed to carrying on as though police work still mattered. He’s a recent police academy graduate, and tries to stick to a by-the-book approach even when the book is roundly ignored both in and out of the police force. When processing what appears to be an all-too-routine suicide (Concord has earned the nickname “hanger town” because of its citizens’ preferred suicide method), he becomes suspicious that there’s more to the case than just another hanging, and finds himself navigating a maze of narcotics trafficking, insurance fraud, and conspiracy theories. Palace is a novice detective, and it shows: he often misses important clues and connections, and chases many dead ends.

At one point I suspected that The Last Policeman was heading in a direction like The Pledge, which is in many ways the anti-detective novel: fabricating a murder around a desperate suicide seems just the right kind of break with reality someone like Henry Palace would have in the face of global doom. But while the novel is thoughtful, and conscious of the genres it’s playing with, it isn’t quite as outside its declared genre as that; Palace does uncover real crimes, but they’re complicated and nuanced by the “unusual circumstance” of the asteroid.

The Mirage

Mustafa used the van’s ignition key as a crude knife and managed to get the package open. Inside, in a slim plastic case, was a deck of playing cards. Each card bore a picture of a man’s face, captioned with an English transliteration of his name and a job title. Mustafa recognized many of the names and faces–almost all of them were prominent Baath Union members–but the job titles were whimsical.
The Mirage by Matt Ruff

Matt Ruff’s “The Mirage” starts as a police procedural and political thriller set in a topsy-turvy, through-the-looking-glass world: a world where the destruction of the World Trade Center towers in Baghdad on 11/9/2001 by a group of American Christian fundamentalists has plunged the United Arab States into a War Against Terror, embroiling it with the failed states and theocracies in North America. It’s a world where the Jewish state was established after World War II in occupied Bavaria, and where Israel and the United Arab States are allied against European and American Christian terrorists. Many of the transformations are broad and obvious, some are subtle and intriguing, and for about 200 pages the conceit holds together well. Ruff’s characters, particularly the Homeland Security agent Mustafa, are well-rounded and interesting, not merely plot devices, and the main characters’ conflicts rise as much from personal history as from the geopolitical world Ruff has created.

But the second half, with a massive expository dump by CIA agent David Koresh (just one of many recastings that seem satirical though not played for obvious laughs) and a too-literal deus ex machina, strains the suspension of disbelief a bit too much. Certainly a major theme of the book is the eruption of alternate realities into one another–Mustafa has begun to find artifacts from our own world, like New York Times articles about 9/11 and a set of the Saddam Hussein “playing cards” issued during the early days of the U.S. invasion of Iraq–but the eruptions become increasingly jarring and crudely drawn as the story winds down. It may have been a more satisfying read if it had ended with the mystery unrevealed, or if it had stretched to twice its length with more time to develop the alternate world and wrap it up more convincingly.

Despite this flaw, though, I found “The Mirage” well worth the read: it’s fast-paced and action-packed at the same time that it raises interesting questions, a combination that is fairly unusual.

Get “Pieces” free while you can!

My short story “Pieces” is available as a free ebook download (MOBI, ePUB, and PDF formats) at my eStory Experiment site until Friday, April 20. On Friday morning, I’ll be moving this story behind the (incredibly cheap) pay wall (50 cents from the experiment site, 99 cents from Smashwords) and putting a new story, “Ichthyology,” up for free downloading.

Get it while you can–I think you’ll enjoy it!

The eStory Experiment

Today I’ve started a little project I’m calling the eStory Experiment. Every Friday, I will post a short story that you can download free in ePUB, MOBI, and/or PDF format. The story will stay free for a week; after that, you can purchase the story either directly from the Cartwheel Media site for fifty cents or from Smashwords (and potentially other ebook retailers) for ninety-nine cents. (Hint: there’s a coupon code at the end of each story that you can use to get any subsequent story for even less!)

My hypothesis is that short stories are uniquely suited to the digital age. I contend that there’s a market for small, portable stories, reasonably priced, that people can read and enjoy in the minutes we carve out for ourselves from our over-busy days. There are details to work out still–how the stories are delivered, how they’re consumed, what price is reasonable–and that’s part of what this experiment is about.

For the first part of the experiment, I’ll be digging into my publishing history. I’ve had about two dozen stories published in small literary journals, both print and online; these are stories that have been selected and edited by smart and talented people, so there’s little risk to the reader that you’ll be spending money on unpolished, not-ready-for-prime-time work. If the experiment continues, I’ll probably introduce some stories written specifically for this project; I have plans for a series of thematically linked stories that is a perfect fit for this experiment.

This experiment will work best if it’s a two-way conversation between readers and writer. Let me know what you think: Are the stories priced correctly? Was it easy to get and read the story? Having tried one story, will you try others? You can send your feedback via the comments on this site, at the Cartwheel Media site, or via Twitter.

You can download the first story, “Pieces,” here:

Pieces

A short story about memory, time, and the things we lose. Originally published in Small Spiral Notebook online, January 2005.

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